i enjoyed it. was a good read my dude
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| Author: | Zero [ March 14, 2011 ] |
| Post subject: | Need some opinions |
there is a new local car enthusiast site blog thingy where im at and i was asked if i wanted to be a guest writer/photographer for them from time to time so i said sure. gear-trends.com I did the feature on the 83 Accord you see. let me know what you thought about my article and my shots either here or there. I just want some feed back so i can improve OR just give it up lol. Thanks guys! |
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| Author: | munster [ March 14, 2011 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Need some opinions |
Good job, man. The car had a good story behind it. Honestly...the story of a car holds my attention moreso than pretty pictures. I could give a shit about a kid with an endless parental budget who is just going to sell the car after the feature. You did a great job. The only sort of feedback I can give you is work on grammar/flow. I'm sure that will come with more writing experience. Don't worry about giving it a magazine sound when reading...give it your flavor. Mix it up some. |
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| Author: | .saint [ March 15, 2011 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Need some opinions |
i enjoyed it. was a good read my dude keep it up! |
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| Author: | DA 9_Chinga [ March 15, 2011 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Need some opinions |
agreed i liked it too meng |
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| Author: | Jams_ej [ March 28, 2011 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Need some opinions |
awesome zero glad to see you're getting opportunities like that it was great!! |
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| Author: | Zero [ March 31, 2011 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Need some opinions |
thanks guys! |
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