my poem....

98exploda · Post by **98exploda** » March 04, 2007

IS GETTIN PUBLISHED! YAY! it's only one of the several i have but thought it was cool

here it is....

i wake up every morning
wondering why
i want to cry
sometimes wishing i could die
but everyday something motivates me
to get up and get on
something telling me to keep on fighting
i gotta make it somehow
life keeps going it wont stop until God decides
i can run but i can't hide
so i have to hold on to my pride and fight to survive

Brandon Nevares

i am a semi-finalist as of right now for a contest. grand prize is $1K
and im also eligible for an annual prize of $10K not expecting to win anything just really stoked one of my poems will be published

oh ya poetry.com is the one publishing it in an anthology book with a lot of other poems by other writers

Post by **Sean @ NDF** » March 04, 2007

you're so emo

JDMJedi · Post by **JDMJedi** » March 04, 2007

congrats on being published!!!!

98exploda · Post by **98exploda** » March 04, 2007

Sean @ ESG wrote:you're so emo

ya normally when i write im pist, depressed, or stressed so that would explain the emo but im not total EMO haha and besides emo is more like god i hate life so im gonna stab myself and hope i die woah is me feel sorry for me type crap. i only mentioned one line about wishing to die and then the rest was more like shut up and keep going

JDMJedi wrote:congrats on being published!!!!

thanks

Bennett @ ESG · Post by **Bennett @ ESG** » March 04, 2007

definitely emo

CRG7 · Post by **CRG7** » March 11, 2007

good luck with the contest.

i was published in one of their books a while back.

vtecdood · Post by **vtecdood** » March 11, 2007

Bennett @ ESG wrote:definitely emo

X2 j/k

but congrats

Secret Squirrel · Post by **Secret Squirrel** » March 11, 2007

Sean @ ESG wrote:you're so emo

hahah pick up emo chicks with that poem

SS

munster · Post by **munster** » March 11, 2007

Congrats, man.

You could DEFINITELY use that to pick up emo chicks. Play the "I'm sensitive and will listen to you" card. Then write a poem about how you banged the crap out of her.

SingleCamEJ8 · Post by **SingleCamEJ8** » March 12, 2007

98exploda wrote:ya normally when i write im pist, depressed, or stressed so that would explain the emo but im not total EMO haha and besides emo is more like god i hate life so im gonna stab myself and hope i die woah is me feel sorry for me type crap. i only mentioned one line about wishing to die and then the rest was more like shut up and keep going

thanks

lol im messing....

very artistic