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Need some opinions

Post by Zero » March 14, 2011

there is a new local car enthusiast site blog thingy where im at and i was asked if i wanted to be a guest writer/photographer for them from time to time so i said sure.

gear-trends.com

I did the feature on the 83 Accord you see. let me know what you thought about my article and my shots either here or there. I just want some feed back so i can improve OR just give it up lol.

Thanks guys!
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Post by munster » March 14, 2011

Good job, man. The car had a good story behind it. Honestly...the story of a car holds my attention moreso than pretty pictures. I could give a shit about a kid with an endless parental budget who is just going to sell the car after the feature. You did a great job.

The only sort of feedback I can give you is work on grammar/flow. I'm sure that will come with more writing experience. Don't worry about giving it a magazine sound when reading...give it your flavor. Mix it up some.
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Post by .saint » March 15, 2011

i enjoyed it. was a good read my dude :thumbup: keep it up!
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Post by DA 9_Chinga » March 15, 2011

agreed i liked it too meng
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Post by Jams_ej » March 28, 2011

awesome zero glad to see you're getting opportunities like that it was great!!

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Post by Zero » March 31, 2011

thanks guys!

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